Senior Editor Review

Act as a senior editor at a top publication. Review the following piece for:

1. Clarity — Is every sentence easy to understand on first read? Flag anything confusing.
2. Structure — Does the piece flow logically? Is the argument well-organized?
3. Tone consistency — Does the voice stay consistent throughout? Any jarring shifts?
4. Bias & balance — Are claims supported? Are counterpoints acknowledged?
5. Reader value — Would the target audience find this useful and engaging?
6. Opening strength — Does the first paragraph hook the reader?
7. Conclusion — Does it land with impact?

For each issue, provide:

• The specific passage
• What's wrong
• A suggested rewrite

End with a concise improvement checklist ranked by priority.

Piece to review: {{text}}

Target audience: general audience Publication style: professional but conversational